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November 23rd, 2014

Doctor Who: Into the Dalek Page 1 of 1 Comments about this page

Into the Dalek

Into the Dalek

(G; Fiction) The Rebel Time Lord don’t play that.

A lot of bloggers liked this moment of “Into the Dalek”. Who Say described Clara’s slapping the Doctor “put this new, colder Doctor in his place”. Tech Times said it “Bravo for smacking some sense back into the Doctor right when he needed it.” The AV Club said “literally slaps sense into the Doctor”.

I completely disagree. There was nothing in the Doctor’s behavior to suggest he enjoyed being right more than he wanted to live. Clara’s actions makes her the worst possible companion to have in a crisis. Because the script was written Steven Moffat (with Phil Ford), her actions implausibly work. This is a lame attempt to make an underwritten female character “strong” by making her mean. Throughout Season 8, their relationship seems more like an Eric Stanton fantasy fantasy.

My Doctor’s reaction is closer to the “rebel Time Lord” they talked about in the Doctor Who World Tour.

Longtime fans will spot my influences. “Clara Oswald never existed” came from the Season 8 finale “Death in Heaven“. During the world tour, Peter Capaldi described his portrayal as a “rebel Time Lord”. “That’s the kind of Time Lord I am” is from David Tennant’s first episode “The Christmas Invasion“.

Materials used for this story
12″ x 18″ live area on Strathmore 500 bristol paper
Blick Black Cat india ink
Speedball nib #512 (phase one inking, outlines)
Short-handle round #4 sable brush (phase two inking)
Ruling pen (borders)
Speedball B6 and B5 (lettering)
Ames Lettering Guide (4.0 even-spaced calibration)
Adobe Photoshop (production, Duo-Shade gray tones)

Inked with the pen first, brush second technique perfected by Alex Toth, Steve Ditko and Joe Maneely. Gray tones applied with an Duo-Shade emulation technique, in an attempt to make this look like a Warren publication.

— Dave M!, making a right with two wrongs.

Talk Back! Most recent of (2)

Dang!

Troy Freund | Posted on December 1st, 2014 at 2:19 pm   

Why such a different presentation between each of the slaps? By how it’s presented, the slap the Doctor gives seems to border on abuse…and it’s hard to imagine the Doctor doing that. All in all, a neat dramatic page, but dang…

re: Dang!

David Marshall | Posted on December 1st, 2014 at 2:31 pm   

There’s definitely a “two wrongs don’t make a right” element, and hopefully the Doctor’s reaction comes off as more reactive than deliberate. The actual episode just plain bothered me. Why would Clara even think of that response…oh yeah, Moffat. Thanks for taking the time to speak up!

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